Monday, October 06, 2008

glazing in a daze

out into a sleeping land

i wish upon a star

delicately do i do in

as it stirs the soul

.sin
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1 comment:

.blink said...

U are Right. Its rather forced. Your clinch line needs to go... I like the phrase 'sleeping land':)

October 7, 2008 at 9:02:00 PM PDT

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